My character, Lillit, saves
's character, Pietro, from a watery doom.
This is my entry for the
Take a Crit and Vamp it contest, which can be found here: [link]
The challenge was to take an old piece of art and, using critique from the other entrants, rework it. We also had to critique the works of at least two other people.
I critiqued more than two because I figured we all could use all of the help we could get. but two of them are: [link]
my own piece was here: [link]
and I got comments and critique that helped me along from:
a more full drawing of the anatomy before putting in the water so that I could be sure that things were at proper angles
more attention to the rope
a straighter horizon (doh!)
/end artist comment of doom!